I wanted to like this book and care about the characters but unfortunately it fell flat for me.
During the first few chapters of Fate Interrupted 1 the characters were great, they had me laughing and caring, then it all went a bit down hill for me.
I couldn't always visualise where the action was taking place and had to read back to see exactly where they were or who was talking? Also the motivation for the characters actions and responses was lacking for me.
This story wasn't for me, sorry, but I'm sure there are others who would enjoy it more.